Battle among blood

Silver was wandering through the woods,thousands of tiny,irritating scratches everywhere on him,clothes torn.He was half dead and he knew it.He needed to find the othere,and fast.He stumbled on.

Better?

"Mmm" Phantomia pulls away from Dragant and walks to Krio, swishing her tail, and gives him a bag of water."You ok?" Her thoughts were on Dragant, but her concern for Krio was genuine.

ooc: im from the midwest see topic native americans

Where exactly is this topic.My apologies for posting .

OOC: how can you give him a bag of water? that defies the laws of physics!

Your joking right?Ever hear of waterskins perhaps?

waterskins aren't so much a bag...of cloth that is hey it is instincts.. anyway what did you think of my post before this one?

Sorry if this sounds harsh,But you really need to write better.Full stops quotation marks etc.And dont rush a story.Th elonger the description,the better.Bags can hold water.Fact.


Fine you do it.

As you wish.

Somewhere deep in this forest,cuttin up a giant boars carcass or three,Shadowrath remembered Krio's injuries and negligently made agesture with his hand,causing a healing aure to pass over Krio,which had the same effects onhim as it did Shadowrath."That should help a little.."he murmered.

" ok guys lets go we have a were wolf to kill"

Phantomia jumps up and starts to hover, "What way?"

OOC: Uh guys aren't you forgetting something? you wouldn't just leave a body lying there would you?

(fang) Yes hehe

picks body off ground "ask krio"

ooc: Sorry Silver I thought you were ok now, just had new powers and amnesia and stuff.

that was just something i wrote to see what you guys think of it...not really happened if you read it carefully

woops sorry

it ok it a simple mistake to make

so........ let the story contunue!

Phantomia inches closer to Dragant until she is directly over him and stares at him.

OOC:alright krio i mean ninja changed my story and im off to sleep so ninja can contunue it till he goes offline then the responsibility lies to fang till he logs off etc

Not Krio.Me.

A large object landed beside Dragant with a wet thump.It was the carcass of a giant boar."Now I can eat!!Oh,sorry Dragant,almost got you..hehehe."He descened from above Dragant and lit a magical fire and proceeded to cook teh boar.

"Shadow sometimes i hate you"

Crumples up a handfull of herbs she plucked a while ago, "Trust me you'll like it." Sprinkles it on the boar.

Krio rejected the aura and was meditating.His wounds were healing on everybody's eyes.
Shadow(he got up,the wounds were healed completely)rematch,now or tomorrow?
He placed his hand on sword handle
If you are up to it.

"no more fighting"

Do not interrupt.
Calmly said Krio.
This is none of your business,it's your friend who is in alliance with wrewolves.
His woice was rising with every second.
Now shut up,get out of my way,OR is it going to be me and you again?
Krio was getting ready for battle.Then he started walking to Shadow.

"Krio stop the werwolves have never harmed us its you that hates them and your half lycan"

You think I like to stay that way?
He was looking at moon,a couple more hours and he will be normal again.
Do you think I feel some sort of sick pride?I slay werewolves not just for living,but because I hate them.As soon as I'm going to slayhim,I'm going to cure myself of that curse.
He looked at Shadow with eyes full of hate.
And don't bother thinking that I won't kill you if you interfere again.
He said to Shadow,then he looked at Dragant
That goes for you as well,if he interferes with me killing them and you will try to stop me,I don't care who you are or what you are,you will die as well.
Then he started walking to Shadow again,with his sword out and hand on his belt.

"You will not cure yourself when you turn i see a glint of pleasure in becoming a werewolf you enjoy the power you long for yourt fathers powers your a hippocrit"

I enjoy it only when I kill them,it makes me feel like my REAL parents are somewhat avenged.There's no pleasure in turning though.There is not an army every time.
He kept walking to Shadow.
The only thing good about my powers is that they can heal me,give me strength,make me even with them.
He jumped over Dragant and Shadow was right in front of him.
I'm sick of you!
He said.
How possibly can you be friends with them?They are not human,they are beasts,like me and you say that they are innocent,don't make me laugh.

they are no different than half-dragons humans are beasts too"

At least they don't slay a whole village for no reason and an army in one blow,don't attack women and children.As much anyway.
There was a small moment of silence.
Why are you defending them?Are you their friend as well?
Krio was getting unstable,bloodlust was in his eyes again.

"I see no ned for destruction of a whole race for revenge on one person your not evilk right your half werewolf not all lycans are evil"